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In looking through my site, I discovered very little occurred whilst I was completing my Master's Degree.  My move to Pinellas County is complete and I no longer spend 2 hours a day on a delirious commute. Huzzah! I have time to create! I've been painting, allowing that to satiate my creative need but of … Continue reading Return

Show or Tell – Word choices and the debate between wordy and descriptive

In reading some of the critiques I've received from folks, I am working on honing my story craft.  I tend toward too much rather than concise.  Still, I'm getting a bit of the "show" them what's happening, rather than "tell" them." I try to think through that when I'm putting together a story but I still … Continue reading Show or Tell – Word choices and the debate between wordy and descriptive